The Opera House
Posted on Nov 6th, 2009
by
RLtruthseeker-artist
Opening the opera house doors,
For a moment I am pierced and silenced by
The overwhelming palace interior
Of the newness and spaciousness that descends upon me, and
Swim like a fish through a phosphorescent sea of possibilities
Never before imagined, awaiting the beauty
And magnificence of an elegant woman who takes center stage in the spotlight,
With her porcelain dress and dark cascading hair.
Star-struck, I am mesmerized by your talents,
A voice that reaches into the heavens,
where even the angels pause and wait with anticipation
For the climax, an endless crescendo which
Carries within it the cluster and stretching
of millions of stars within a million galaxies,
Of an endless sunset
And brings forth an eternity
That never ends.

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First draft…I'm not sure how the revision will turn out. I'm not sure that I like this version. Will post the revision once I am done with it. rl.
lovely images, rL.
I see,
pause……. silence……crescendo. And lastly I see heaven opened up with the cosmos sitting above the singer's head
So beautiful, RL! It feel at times we have to climb the Himalayan peak, thousand and thousands of difficulties, and thousands and thousands of possibilities! - a sea of possibilities, where we converse with moon and stars, dialogue like clouds. On these peaks we are born.
All our sharing, giving to one another, is just to give courage, faith, to say don't be worried, don't be frightened, keep moving ahead…
Enjoyed your poem very much…
with love,
Cheyenne
Winterfruit, Attainment, thank you so much for your beautiful words. sincerely, rl.